Thursday 4 September 2014

Rainbows



As sometimes happens when we are walking our dog on the University of Alberta South Campus, a photo op comes along. And as I sometimes do, I snapped it with my phone camera, then sent the picture to my much-published poet friend, Anna Marie Sewell. And as Anna sometimes does, she returned a poem based on the photo. She focused on the geese.

And as I sometimes do, I pulled a few of my favorite lines from that poem (italicized to give credit where it is due), and worked them into one of my own. I focused on the rainbow:


Eyes follow the refraction:
a call to attention,
a suggestion that all
songs slide down from above….or
another on-ramp to the sky
a reminder that song also rises, 
reaches from the singer’s depths
to enrich the chorus all around, to feed soul-
hungry voyagers from their own resources, turn
their emptiness, their appetite,
into sustenance, the chance to feed
on their own need, to answer the question:
Shall we be fertile?”
 What, then will
we bring to the table, chanters in the
choir that never ceases?

Then another friend, Shayne, came back with a poem on the Portuguese concept of "saudade, for which there is no complete translation in English, a poem that connected through both geese and rainbow as essential to the landscape, so  went back to work with lines from both Anna Marie and Shayne to push things along:

a constant
vague desire for something
lingering at the bright
union of rainbow reaching
down to the grass and the geese,
backs turned to the spilling
violent color behind;

or hiding just beyond
the ragged edges refracting
into the clouds that half-
helped create this call to attention:

the sense that we have not
exactly seen this all before
in all its rolling untamed

familiarity

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