Some more haiku-formed musings, this time with "wave(s)" as syllable #5:
Rolling, tossing waves
calmed by a softening voice
pattern for the ages
Ringlets, curls in waves
wind-tossed strands across bright eyes
flirtatious protein
Rippling shimmers waves
gold to the edge, bread basket
migrant peasants dream
Star to the crowd, wave
walking the fame eternal
self adoration
Never amber waves
grainy photos black and white
myth and nostalgic
Roll in, roll out, waves
push up the strand pull full back
note of joy? Sadness?
Invisible waves
communicate essentials
twittering nuisance
And, a late addition Saturday, in honour of the snowstorm that settled in for the weekend last night:
Mid-April flurries
delicate disappointment
crystal on crystal
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Friday, 13 April 2012
Tuesday, 13 March 2012
Heart to Heart
I was reading a poem by Carol Light; "Raynaud's Weather." The first part is prose poem, the second a series of linked haiku-formed stanzas. Since I usually work in prose, I thought some deliberate practice with haiku form might be useful, at least as a way to break out of a habit.
So, I fixed (by what process I cannot recall--if there was a process--maybe it was just that that's how the first one went) on a series in which the fifth syllable would always be the word "heart." And away I went.
To try, to take, heart
beat the drums loudly and lordly
say "no" nevermore
Lonely hunter, heart
less an organ, pure idea
seeking company
Matter has, needs, heart
strong nucleus, moving core
streaming particles
Lifetime measured heart
starts continues flutters stops
soars throbs sore goes out
Take it all to heart
attack root causes affect
ranges of choices
Supporting rings, heart
wood pithy prone to decay
devalues timber
Without love no heart
break without numbing heart break
no recovery
Back-slapping joy heart-
y zealous greeting betrays
fear of loneliness
Action, stasis, heart
stopping each in its own way
silence follows thumping
Home of all homes heart
land, place from, destination
radiates ways back
Drums imitate heart
throb stimulate call to arms
destroying loving
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